In Room 9 we've been learning about persuasive language. We've designed ads and written arguments. Here is Emma's argument about the problems caused by litter:
I believe littering is silly. Just because they can’t be bothered some people drop rubbish while they’re out walking, out their windows, and at the beach. We have rubbish bins to stop people from littering.
Firstly it’s polluting. People just drop there rubbish everywhere. There are plenty of rubbish bins around so people should put their rubbish in there. When people drop rubbish on sand it goes out to sea and the poor fish get sick. Also, oil spills from ships can make birds sick.
Secondly, people litter beside the plants, which can poison them. The plants need water and sunlight, not rubbish! When you drop your rubbish at a junk yard, the gas goes down into the soil which can make the plants die. Feed them water instead.
Thirdly litter makes animals sick. Goats come along and eat anything, which can make them sick up, which is not very nice for them. It can make other animals get tummy bugs and sea creatures choke.
There are a lot of people who drop their rubbish everywhere. Do you really think littering is the best thing to do? If you’re one of those litterers out there, you are very lazy. Watch where you are dropping your rubbish.
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16 November 2009
22 September 2009
Today We Made Spectacles of Ourselves!
17 September 2009
Our Rainbowland Art!
We're going to tell you
It was hard to get the dye in the right spot. -Emma
I thought the hardest part was the pencil drawing because our draft was small and we had to enlarge it for the final picture. -Millie
I thought the easiest part was the Vivid part because we just had to trace over to make it look like Indian ink. -Alfred
25 June 2009
17 March 2009
Family Traditions
Earlier in the term we read a big book called Friendly Families. We found out about some interesting family traditions.
We used Kid Pix to illustrate a statement about our own family traditions.
Have a look at our work in the slide show below...
We used Kid Pix to illustrate a statement about our own family traditions.
Have a look at our work in the slide show below...
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